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Oh, I hear noise in the begining, that is realy annoying! I understand that it is connected with synth but IMHO this is not good. Yes, i hear there your own style, but "there is room to grow"(i du no is correct this proverb here).

LunacyEcho responds:

An annoying noise? Uh oh. That's not good. It might be the really bad mixing I did with the synth and the strings. FORGIVE ME SENPAI

Well that sound good in some moments but in general it is far from perfect. Tempo enough fast but track is not vigorous.

LunacyEcho responds:

Yeah, this wasn't really written with production quality in mind. It was the first "real" song I wrote in Logic; gotta understand how to compose before you learn how to produce!

Oh, dude, that was... If be honest... Try harder next time if it possible. I know that it was hard for you but that was too soft dubstep. I mean that I have some "dubstep sence" and when I hear it my "dubstep sence" found nothing, exept "crow sream" and "woble".

LunacyEcho responds:

:D

It definitely wasn't a very good effort at dubstep. I'm not very good at it, and I wasn't in that much of a composing mood when I made it. :P

Still, I'm glad there were elements that made you feel like there was a 'dubstep scene'! Thanks for listening, anyhow.

Did you use FL studio to make this track? Sounds ehough mad!

Eshio responds:

Yes i use FL studio 10,thank you.

Dude i hear there some Finnish trolls here, that is good! But it is not enough to make sound strong. May be this caused by bells.

Ok, that's good! Now your sound enough clean, i don't want tell to you that previous sound was not enough clear, i just mean that now sound is better. Yeap!

LunacyEcho responds:

Thanks! I think one of the big advantages Logic Pro has is that its instruments are a lot better quality than Garageband's. Thanks for listening!

Hip-Hop in Iraq.
Yeap. This track cool but intro is not.
I think that xylophone(is it piano?) is unnecessary in begining.

LunacyEcho responds:

:D Perhaps I may have misled you with my tags. The tags weren't supposed to be locations to imagine when listening to this song; it was supposed to be a reference to a few of the countries participating in the Gulf War, or Operation Desert Storm (titular reference).

I'm glad you enjoyed the track! When I wrote the intro, it was kind of a placeholder, since I wrote the chorus first, but I guess I kinda got used to it and it stuck. :/ That happens a LOT.

Thanks for listening!

Ahahaha, dj-dj! That sounds good.

NeoAlchemist247 responds:

Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it.

-DJDj

Dude, this is n't metal :-)
Sound quality is not enough good. I mean that it sound is not enough deep. I think that is becouse you used Noteflight.
If you use soft for education try Magix(easy, cheap, good instrumentals, easy to work with voice and MIDI) or Cubase (not easy, not cheap, for proffesionals, good synthesizer).

LunacyEcho responds:

When did I say it was metal? :D I believe the tagline is "Classic Rock", which is under the "Metal/Rock" category. In other words, the "Metal/Rock" category contains tons of subgenres, Classic Rock being one of them. And I believe this is classic rock.

Yeah, the mixer on Noteflight is only available with a premium account, which I'm not that interested in investing in. I've already got Garageband as my primary music-making software, but those other options sound interesting. The thing is, I use a Mac, so lots of software doesn't work for me. :D Thanks for the suggestions, though!

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