OatmealPecheneg's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Snowflake]

Seems you have a progress but it is not enough. Work harder with outlines and body structure.

CocoVersi responds:

Thank you. Will work on it.

[Water]

Good outlines, good idea, but bad coloring (shadows) and proportions.

CocoVersi responds:

Thanks!
I'll work on those.

[Camille]

You're done well. Not best but not so bad at all.

CocoVersi responds:

Thanks!

[Cat Girl]

Much better but need more attention to outlines, colours and proportions.

CocoVersi responds:

Will work on those!

[Holding Stars In Your Hands]

Dude, this painting looks like it is unfinished. Try harder next time.

CocoVersi responds:

I'm not trying to be rude, but that's the effect I was going for. It's meant to look unfinished.

[Color Of Loss]

Nice try. This coloring looks dirty becouse of those black things in sky.

CocoVersi responds:

The black things in the sky are debris and smoke. The atmosphere is dirty.

[Hold the line!]

Looks like cover of Kreators album"Endless Pain". BTW this picture still need something, maybe outlines. Good emotion explanation but hard to see what exactly is going on.

AdventVoice responds:

I always felt it needed some more work. Still unsure what will really do it though, so I left it as is.
this is another rendition of the same piece https://avproductionsblog.files.wordpress.com/2018/01/520785_adventvoice_hold-the-line.jpg?w=816 but I like my original best

[Inktober #2 Spruce Dues]

Do you know what is ever green? Evergreen! Evergreen is a heart of Taiga. Taiga is more than just a forest. Forest full of trees that emit essential oils. Oils made air soft and easy for breathing and meditation. Meditation is a way to find ballance. Ballance is in green colour.
Excellent color balance, mate!

Cyberdevil responds:

All in a sequence or a cycle, huh. :) Thank you, I'm pretty happy with how this one turned out!

[Inktober #6 Rainsicks]

Great concept of new order. 66 + final 6 drops from sky.
Raining blood, from a lacerated sky,
Bleeding its horror,
Creating my structure now I shall reign in blood.
Reign in blood or raining blood. But does it matter if peope will suffer in new brave world? I say- human life matters

Cyberdevil responds:

They say it's a brave new world... still humans need to brave this world! That it does.

[Inktober #8 Eightball]

Chance we call everything that we can not understand and analyze until the end. Books apon 8-ball is a good metaphor for this scientific question.

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah... that is a good metaphor! Wish I'd thought of that when I drew this...